Friday, June 1, 2012

Trifecta Writing Challenge

Complete the following story in 33 words:

'It wasn't the first time.'

(The five words are not to be included in your 33 words)

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It wasn’t the first time she heard him utter those three words. “I love you.” He kissed her lips with fragility. “I love you more.” She whispered in return. Her arm dangled over his body. She fell asleep.
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13 comments:

  1. Sandra TylerJune 1, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    sweet. good 33 word story! Harder to write these short things than the 333 ones!

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  2. hyperCRYPTICalJune 1, 2012 at 5:38 PM

    Lovely words to go to sleep with.

    Anna :o] at http://puzzelicious.blogspot.com

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  3. GinaJune 1, 2012 at 8:48 PM

    Oh, yeah! Lovely love! I love it.

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  4. Just Keepin It Real, Folks!June 2, 2012 at 6:10 AM

    AAAAAHHHHHHH how awesome.

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  5. Jennifer WorrellJune 2, 2012 at 7:46 AM

    I love how you expressed that time before sleep:) Sigh:)

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  6. Whispering ThoughtsJune 2, 2012 at 11:14 AM

    This is a lovely reply to the challenge.

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  7. According to Mags...June 2, 2012 at 12:24 PM

    Very tender. I really like this one.

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  8. AnonymousJune 2, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    This is so sweet. I do enjoy a good love story :)

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  9. OldDogNewTitsJune 2, 2012 at 10:18 PM

    Refreshingly sweet, compared to so many darker ones. Including mine. :)

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  10. Celeste NeumannJune 3, 2012 at 6:01 AM

    I enjoy the imagery you created here.

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  11. AnonymousJune 3, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    d'aww adorable!

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  12. TrifectaJune 3, 2012 at 11:15 AM

    Sweet response to the prompt. Thanks for linking up. Please come back for the new prompt tomorrow.

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  13. UnknownJune 3, 2012 at 10:17 PM

    I'm lucky.... this is real life for me!

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